Your eyes burneth into mine,
lightning clear,
initiate our passion's storm,
draweth near.
Our lips doth meet in lover's dance,
slash of rain,
torrential drumbeat, hearts entwined,
we join again.
Slowly, spent, the storm will ebb,
returns await,
Rainbow banner of our love,
passion's fate.
A contest entry
- Whispered Words of Sensuality by StormGoddess.
1000 points, ended May 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Awsome!!! Great Job!!!! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future.
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This is strong and sensual. Yet, it portrays such a weakness when it comes to that feling of love. Nicely done with this.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
The imagery in this is superb. I love this. Very very powerful. It just goes to show you the power of how strong love can be - as well as the gentleness of it.
Wonderful Montie.
Keep wriitng and good luck in the competition.
Love
Always
Wayne Leon
xx
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