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The Tormented

Trapped forever in this rotting house
or at least until she solves the mystery
the horror of so many death so long ago
These trapped spirits don't lead the way
instead try to bring her to their world
with nothing but a camera to keep her from joining them

Every night in dreaming she returns to search
in the hell she created by missing her love
Following him into the mansion of sleep
she finds her life tied to a mirror of herself
And as the tattoo grows this life bleeds together
the ghosts that she begins to see in reality
the song she hears playing forever in her mind
A lullaby designed to take her back to sleep
keep her forever with these stakes in her hands

The young girls that crave to keep her there with them
as is their calling, their one goal in life
to stab the priestess and lull her to sleep
Keeping her eyes closed to bind the rift
and give the dead a boat to cross the river
Take away their pain, their loss and sorrow
keep it in your eyes, and stay in your sleep

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Wrote this about Fatal Frame 3, one of the best games ever.

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  • squirrelgirl
    May 6, 2008

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    I guessed that this was about a book or something, but was leaning more towards a book.
    Is Fatal Frame the one that you didn't play while I was at your house, because it was scary or something? It sounds like it could be. If it is, I can tell by this that I wouldn't want to watch you play it, it sounds too scary.
    My computer is being stupid. Well, it's not mine, it's the school's. The shift key wasn't working, then the period wasn't working, and then I couldn't type in this box. It's all better now, stupid pc's....
    This is so creapy. If that's what you were trying to get at, you did a good job.
    May your pencil never break!
    ~squirrel