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The Magic Lady's Birthday





bird day
in her garden
a robin's song



humming
her birthday song
a colibri



tequila
on cinco de mayo
tipsy birds





Author notes

So sorry I missed the contest Cheryl...
Still want to give you my birds lines
Happy Birthday!

Glad I still could make it Cheryl lol
JFTJOI...not to be judged

A contest entry

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  • Peteskid gold member
    May 7

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    birds of such different feathers, Cinco de Mayo brings back such memories... i think...actually it's all a little fuzzy... wonderful writes... beauty, light and humor so very nice...h


  • Namita silver member
    May 7

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    This is so creative, Mari! So wonderful, each one of them And I just love the background. Again.

    - namita


  • mina nagi gold member
    May 6

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    These are brilliant... the last one is not just tipsy but witty too...

    I'm stealing the BG

    mina


  • MagicLady silver member
    May 6

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    Thank you for the poem(s)....you know how much I loved them all. For anyone needing to know why this is a prewrite, it was a birthday poem for me, and I asked her to enter it.

    These modern haikus are so sweet. I only saw one other reference to Cinco de Mayo. I love that tiny little hummingbird, colibri. I have never seen one, but they are beautiful.

    Thank you again,

    Cheryl

  • MagicLady silver member
    May 6
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    Thank you dear Mari. I love the backgound, did you make it? Can I borrow it? The poem is adorable and I like the reference to Cinco de Mayo. Think you were the only one to mention that. If you sign back on check out the contest....I reopened it...please put it in? Thanks!!

    Cheryl


    • MariGoes gold member
      May 6
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      yesterday evening I saw the contest would be open for more 9 hours, but I still missed the deadline this morning. My entry would be a JFTJOI anyway

      I'm happy you liked the haiku and BG, and you may not borrow it, it's already yours

  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    May 6

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    Singing,humming and tipsying...
    sounds like a fun party, Mari!

    Clever!!

    Aesthete


  • Yemassee silver member
    May 6

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    The third birdku is hilarious and I don't think you know this but I like humor....(straight face goes here.)

    The second is cute, and I like the parallel between humming and the colibri.

    Now write one about birds and Moxie.

    Please excuse me while I hijack your poem for personal gain.....

    MAGIC LADY, I assume you will read this triadku so let me say happy birthday, wow, that rhymed, man I'm a poet...Oh, yes, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, may all your chickens come home to roost...oh wait, that isn't what I think it means...I mean't....

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