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Bloody Apples

She licks the blood from her fingers
The metallic taste making her high
His mutilated body beneath her
She grabs an apple from beside his head
Dipping and swirling
Dipping and swirling
Until the blood entirely coats the apple
She takes a bite with excitement
The blood running off her face
She drags the body to the fireplace
And watches as the flames engulf his remains
A smile spreads across her face
Never get on the dark side of Alice

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  • Tattboyspet
    June 18, 2008

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    hahahahahahahahahahahaha - This MUST be Alice Cooper and not Alice in Wonderland
    lovely!
    congrats on the HM


  • storiesuntold gold member
    June 2, 2008
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    Oh my goodness

    I dont think I would want to get on her dark side


  • foryourowngood
    May 18, 2008

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    Well umm Id say the dark side of alice is definately not the place to be. This is another good write, very dark and thrilling.


  • XxTiggerxX
    May 14, 2008
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    This is really good...I love it =]
    Xx


  • shecantstopfalling.
    May 12, 2008

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    haha! Bad Alice is a clothing brand!!!!lol....sorry for the exitment....


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 6, 2008

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    A very dark and very horrific side of Alice...and to dip an apple in her victims blood and eat it....WOW!!! nice gorey imagery with this prompt, poet...

  • woooooo. scary. sounds fun.

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