They say a good man is hard to find.
Well, it took a while, but I got him.
He works long days,
Comes home with dirty hands
But that does not bother him
Cause he is doing it for me.
He does it so we can someday have a family, a house, and a decent car
And whatever else I may want to make me happy
All he cares about is making me happy
He doesn't wake me, for he knows I like my sleep.
He is so forgetful, but he tries
oh how he tries.
He listens to me bitch about work and other girls
He sits on the edge of the tub while I put on my make-up and fix my curls.
I'm not the greatest cook, yet he smiles and says
Oh man that was good, it really was.
Grabs my ass as I go up the stairs
Lets me know he still cares.
Plants me flowers in the spring
Scoops my sidewalks in the winter
Rakes my leaves in the fall
And mows my lawn in the summer.
But most importantly, he loves me
He really, really does love me.
A contest entry
- Ladies Describe Your Dream Guy by D Saul So Sexy.
700 points, ended May 8, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow I think you should keep him
Nice work
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i dont know whats ^ but i can garuantee i am loving everything i thus far read i think you did a very great excellent job penning this
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Aw, that was good!
I didnt need to know he grabs your A**. Lol. But, hey, it was good. Lol




