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*Cough Cough*

Hello?

Excuse me...

ahem...

Ma'am

...

Ms.

...

Mrs.

...

...

...

Sir...?

I just wondered what aisle the cold medicine was on?
I just got off from work and
I'm sort of in a hurry
you see.

Ahh

Hello?

...

...

...

Alright
enough is enough
get off your cellphone
UNPLUG YOURSELF
take the headphones out of your ears
you are at WORK woman!
Work.
Stop flirting with the bag boy and tell me where I can find some damned cold medicine.

Aisle eight?

*cough*

Thanks.

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  • HugsForEveryone
    July 11, 2008
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    oh, boy, This is frustrating


  • Silly Rabbit.
    July 3, 2008
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    oh brother i can see this happening. its well done and i much enjoyed reading this


  • Angelflower
    May 27, 2008

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    Oh dear.. this was a very enjoyable
    read.. It really brought a smile to my face,
    and many others I'm sure..and many will be able to relate to this piece a lot..
    You did a wonderful job, thanks for sharing..
    Best of luck..

    Angel


  • Amazon Huntress
    May 11, 2008

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    Very nice take on the theme, lighthearted and easy to relate to. Well penned.
    Thanks for entering!
    *~Huntress~*


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    HAHAHA
    Oh my goodness that was funny! Soooo true too... get to work people!!! That's what you're paid for!! lol


  • jane-doe
    May 6, 2008
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    LOL!

    This poem was so funny and true, lol. Good job

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