Curled up in his jacket,
Crickets chirp,
A burst of night air
Draws us even closer
A shooting star...
My wish has come true.
Author notes
Prompt: Gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky
In a list
A contest entry
- Cherished Quickie - PIF by StormGoddess.
425 points, ended May 7, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Well deserving of the silver trophy. I enjoyed the read. I love taking my hubby out for a nice midnight stroll. good work here
mylee -
Wonderful. Now if only mine would. Great take on the prompt. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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Once again, sweetness overload!!! oh the feelings, the most beautiful, so peaceful with one another, in each other's arms...
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aw, this poem is precious! reminds me of the first few dates
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This is sweet and captures a warmth and closeness that makes it a delightful read. Excellent.
Good luck
Garrison
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My first reaction was that of a Roman candle...
It breaks in the sky with brilliant colors of happiness.
I love this one...it has your unmistaken romantic style to it that is universal.
It's like a beautiful surprise on a blanket under the celebrating sky. A crisp snap to it...love it gypsy.
I love when ya toss one over to me like that! ..Superb writing!
BLESSINGS,
LIAM
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