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Moonlit Sky

You give me air,
reason my heart keeps beating.
Underneath a moonlit sky,

I no longer have to question why.

You are my destiny. 

 

 

 

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The prompt will be:
Gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 7, 2008
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    Ah, love this. Romantic and fits the prompt well. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    May 6, 2008

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    This is so beautiful. Such deep feeling you have conveyed with so few words. Awesome job! Good luck in the contest.