From afar I feel your presence
Eyes of oceans blue and deep
Penetrating my soul with fire
Heat of the game leaves a trace
Begging you more of the same
Lips fragrant message caress my skin
Hair skimming my chest no retreat
Tossing and turning in my bunk
Reminiscing of your tantalizing touch
No other can fill your place
Starlight circles my head
Want is need you have control
My soul is yours to keep
Fingertips search
Arches of pleasure
Collisions of heart beats
I remember it all
Counting the days to my return
An angel in the midst
A contest entry
- Whispered Words of Sensuality by StormGoddess.
1000 points, ended May 27, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful
wow talk about full bodied images!!..I loved this style..and the picture was a really nice touch..it set the stage for this romantic and 'tantalizing' poem..really nice write!
-Lu
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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This is beautiful..magickal infact. A vivid image of sensualness sparks from your quill with this. Nicely done.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Brilliant!!!
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Thank you for the compliments on my poem!! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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Awesome imagery...
magically delightful!!!
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You're most welcome!!!
It's always refreshing to read a male's perspective on love and romance. Best of luck in this contest, you have a winner here!!!
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Thank you hun!! I just write what I feel! LOL Don
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THANK YOU FOR THE EXTRA POINTS!!!
Well, hun ~ I believe you are very generous with your poetry and your feelings, as well as your hard-earned points!!! Thanks again !!! Peace & love, Cyn
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Lovely! Softly sensual and full of yearning and desire!!
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Thank you my dear! Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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the imagery in this is amazingly sensual i love it!!! i especially love the last three lines.
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Thank you for the comment on my poem. Happy you enjoyed it. Don
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Just Beautiful
What a beautifully written sensual poem. I really liked this one. The imagery and the flow are just awesome. Oh the dreams of romance with the one you love. Excellent poem, I truly enjoyed this one.
Much Love
Always
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Thank you Kelle Marie for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem! So happy you enjoyed it. Always a pleasure hearing from you! Much Love & God Bless, Don
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Stunning!
What a beautiful image you have painted with these words,
warm and loving indeed. Best of luck you you Sir ~Bret~
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Thank you Bret for the inspiration and compliments on my poem! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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SIGH!!!
Oh My Dear Brother,
This is just beyond words! What a beautiful read!! And yes, love does travel across distance, time, and space! What a wonderful job you did on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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Thank you my dear sister for the inspiring comment and compliments on my poem. Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Thanks again Don
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Thoughts of love traveling across the distance and remembrance of the "collision of heartbeats" Absolutely beautiful imagery...
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Thank you for the wonderful comment and compliments on my poem! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Don
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BREATH TAKING
I found myself holding my breath as each line caressed the tongue so sweetly...reminiscing of a soft love from the pass and with a tender hunger waiting for its return...Winner wrote all over it!
can I have my breath back now*wink*
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Thank you my dear!! Happy to hear you enjoyed it. Your comment and compliments are so inspiring at a time when I need the inspiration. Thanks again, Don
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