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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    May 9, 2008

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    Ahhh yes! Lies are a slippery slope indeed which leave us in a tangled heap at the end!

    (personally I love the way you set it out)


  • Hadji Murad
    May 6, 2008

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    This really is not fun on the eyes, and the form takes away from the depth of the poem. I liked what the words said though. Nice job and good luck.