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Frog

An eastern chorus frog, I sing -
my call, it-it, penetrating
the thickets dense where I stay cool
within the shallows of a pool.
In lowlands, marshy swamps and glades
uninterrupted by the shade,
full sun's reflected off my frown
of russet and verona brown.
I have a stripe that lines my back
of chestnut brown, faint spots of black
on either side; a chamois band
around my upper jaw extends
beyond the stripe in warmest buff.
Though shy, my cry betrays my bluff.

Author notes

Thank you to Pamela for my frog charm.

My Charms:

ice skate
canoe
thimble
pine cone (claimed)
maple leaf (claimed)

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  • peridotPixi
    September 14, 2008

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    this is a cool poem for the charm contest, i like how you tell so much detail about the frog here, congratulations on your gold
    ~Amy


  • NeonRose
    May 10, 2008
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    Wonderful portrayal of the creature, right down to the voice! Congratulations on winning the Gold!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 8, 2008

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    I simply LOVE this frog. Wonderful rhyme. Wonderful feelings and thoughts. Excellent entry. Thank you so much for this. Thank you. ~Pamela


  • myrataal silver member
    May 7, 2008

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    Ah!

    So wondrous in its clever observations and rich word usage ... Perfect poetry, playful and colourful.

    I wanna be that froggie! Perhaps a prince may kiss me?

    Blessed be!

    Myra


  • fortyninereasons gold member
    May 6, 2008
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    I am claiming the maple leaf. Thank you for my charm. Juls

  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    May 6, 2008
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    What a great list. I love it! I may be back fro that ice skate.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    Hello ea ~ I am claiming your pine cone for my charm bracelet thank you... x Lavender Butterfly.

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