Prime

Now you’ve had enough
you can’t listen to no more
You’ve heard all the words
not worth fighting for
Crashing and bashing
crying out in rhyme
perfect in your prime

A contest entry

PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel. 950 points, ended May 7, 2008, 12 entries
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Nighttime angel
May 6, 2008

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I love the rhyme scheme that you have here, its flawless. the flow of the words reminds me of a song. I love your take on the prompt, excellent poem you have here.

good luck

kat
Domz101
May 6, 2008
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I LIKE THIS LOADS
BOMBIN - LOVED IT MAN...WELL DONE - DOMZ

BEST OF LUCK FELLA - =)
Griswold
May 6, 2008

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Hmmmmmmmmmm, sounds a bit like a song to me Well done for the prompt, best of luck to you...scott