She shimmers in unfaithful destiny.
Every whispering solitude
subsides to deep moaning agony.
While walking on trembling kisses
she sweeps her aura
in hopes that dreams shape
is much beautiful than her.
A contest entry
- PIF - picture inspired by amaranthine lover.
363 points, ended May 14, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and well expressed. Congratulations on the honorable mention.
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this is pretty good. Congratulations on your honorable mention. keep up your amazing work.
CrimsonViper
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Beautiful work my friend.
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