Piercing innocent minds whose thoughts
echo rumors with deafening reverberation
Clamoring harsh discordant scandalous plots
cacophony of babbling busybody commotion
Hearsay raging pandemoniums sacrifice
backbiting whispers - a barrage of advice
Author notes
30 Word PIF
Picture is the Prompt
the Artist:
http://bloodygrave.deviantart.com/art/Ironic-Silence-77283691
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel.
950 points, ended May 7, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really enjoyed reading this poem that you have penned. excellent take on the prompt. I love the whole poem, can't just find one part that I like better than the other.
outstanding poem.
good luck
kat
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Tang,
I have seen the pic and this does match it to a 'T'. Very well done. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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A very nice flow, extreme in design ant fluent in words. My best wishes in the contest
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Well done with this one bro!
I love your words throughout this.
Good luck to you in this contest!
Jeremy0826 -
Hmmm, do I detect a bit of cold edge in the words here? Fits the picture hun, well thought out to go into the mind of the image.
Good luck to you darlin!
Storm
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Hello brother Tang. 
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