Oh allow me to taint you with my dark desires.
Come let me bath you in my burning fires.
I know your strength surpasses my own, let me draw you in.
My body ablaze you driving me past all I know.
You collide within my inward turmoil. I scream... not in rage.
You take me under... I belong to you and you to me.
Oh, What a lovely dark little dream.
Please tell me what you think
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wow i didn't know you wrote this is a very good poem
oh b/w this is megan's little sister heather hi
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WOW THANKS
I didn't know you wrote either! ^.^ I haven't been on here in so long.I hit a writers block some months ago & just haven't felt the tug lately to put pen to paper so to say! Thanks for the comment though.I have tons of poems that I haven't shared as of yet! LOL A lot of them I am still working on! ^.^
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This was a beautiful write, and seemed to have a dark expression of emotion to it. I especially liked the ending. It seemed to have an irony to it, like the way of describing a dark dream as something lovely seems to imply it to be happy when darkness usually makes me think of sadness or dry humor or something. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
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Oh Thank You ^.^
I was waiting for someone's opinion on this one. It is both dark and lovely and I appreciate that you saw that in my write. It was a short piece, but important to me as well. Thanks for reading over it, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. -
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You're welcome. I hadn't been by your page in awhile and since you commented on one of my poems, I wanted to return the favor. I enjoyed the poem very much. It was well written.
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