I would sing you cream
with all the artistry of pearls,
created from a tiny grain of sand
you would kiss me mauve
in torpid nights of shadowed lust
living in the haze
of crimson, heart that wants
what the eyes already see
In a list
A contest entry
- Whispered Words of Sensuality by StormGoddess.
1000 points, ended May 27, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Cleverly suggestive
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In such simple words, you have painted an amazingly beautiful and definitely sensual picture. Breathtaking entry you have here.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
BREATH TAKING
Such beauty flowing from your golden pen...I love the line, you would kiss me mauve...pulls a sigh right out me...Thank you for sharing such beauty and much luck in the contest...looks like a winner to me
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z Ann, this one just poured out with color for some reason, a moment of reflection I think Love, C
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This is absolutely breath taking. Superbly crafted dear poetess... x Many blessings, Love and light, Lavender Butterfly.
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Oh sighhhh
wow, this is brilliant, sensual and the imagery in the words, just great
Beautiful daarl and good luck in the contest
Cin
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but it still doesn't have a title, I am lost for this one! Love, C
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I would go with Torpid nights
if that helps
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