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Shuddering Heart Beats

A terrible darkness clings there at my heart.
Do you feel it there? Does it bring you despair?
It has built a resistance to our love, it's fortress of of anger and hate.
My love oh my love my heart weeps as it beats.
We must sweep such ugliness away. We must tear away this fatal seed.
Come to me. Hold me. I will come to you. I will hold you close.
Ah my love there there... We are still here.
I feel lighter where the darkness resides...
Pray stay close let us find a better compromise.

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  • Chocolate Chip
    May 8, 2008
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    i enjoyed this peice. i think it's a nice write and i really liked it.