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God Alone

Outside it looks like you have it all together
While inside the voices are screaming, crying out
Be still, oh my soul
No more persecuting me, taunting me, raging on
The wind will not toss me about
He has anchored me
No more hopelessness
With all that I am, I will bless God
My soul will wait silently
For God alone

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  • ShadoWarrior gold member
    May 6

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    Nice

    Nice entry, the inner conflict and the facade of peace within. I was about to post a short one callled tangled Web, same but different. Excelent wrtite with such few words my friend.

  • Lio Alexander
    May 6

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    Hello living4jcatelim,
    Great spiritual poem! I enjoyed reading it..

    Seems you have a lot of potential! You already have the format down and you certainly have a way with words!

    Great poem

    Lio
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