Left at the alter, alone, afraid,
after her mothers vicious tirade.
Fiance left, nowhere to be found,
sitting in tears, may as well drown.
Her special day, turned to nightmare.
Author notes
Love you Tory
Background free for AP use.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel.
950 points, ended May 7, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love your take on the prompt. wasn't what I expected, but I am really glad that you went with this. excellent job.. I missed your poems a lot. I'm so glad that you entered. this never happened to me, but to some of my friends, not a pleasant place to be, very painful and sad.
good luck
kat
p.s. absolutely love the background
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Such pain flowing from your pen...you have really drawn out the emotion from this picture...a very sad read but very good and thank you for sharing...good luck in contest
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Wow, here is a take I didn't expect. Wonderful minds on this site! This was very well done and great imagination. My best wishes in the contest.
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Good poetry
Wonderfully conceived and brilliant
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White dress - I should have thunk of that!!!
Yep! This is a bride to be in distress - you've captured the pic
Good Luck in the contest
Tang
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awww...sad poem ...excellent take on the prompt...best to you in the contest~ blessings always~ Trisha
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Ouch! That sucks! Can definitely see that happening in this picture. Good work.
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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You should win with such a background - that's right bro - every once in a while: Quickies Rule!
Wishing you luck!
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tickles and runs.... heheh
Good luck.
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amazing background. a little quickie obsessed.
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I used to be back when quickies were really quickies.
I have not used this background in months.
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