posies proposed trust
now fair fields appear dust
with thistles conquered by weeds
as heart concedes
it would have been better to mistrust
than to have given into love's needs
Author notes
Image credit:
http://bloodygrave.deviantart.com/art/Ironic-Silence-77283691
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie by Nighttime angel.
950 points, ended May 7, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well expressed. A great take on the prompt. Congrats on the bronze.
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ahh this is one that I can relate to so much. outstanding take on the prompt. I love the last 2 lines the best. something that I should have done I suppose. excellent poem.
good luck
kat
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An interesting take on the prompt. Very well done indeed, no lack of imagination here. My best wishes to you in the contest.
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good
This is very well done! good flow -
Wow.. this is amazing and so perfect for the pic! Sigh.. I know this one so well!
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Ooo! Placement and alliteration deep with rhyme complimenting the picture
Good Luck in the contest
Tang
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Well I'll be. I actually understood this one...
TFF... Heh Great take on the prompt...Scott
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posies can also propose sneezing
yeah, always look at the good and it will be good, start doubting and you're screwed!
lol!
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Damnit! I'm leaving.
Nice take on the picture. And all nice and rhymey too!
Good luck in the contest.
Storm
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Don't you go going nowheres. hehe
Thanks
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And good luck to you my friend!
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