Bright little Bumble,
on the brink of a crumble.
Below the ants are scrambling,
blazing hot they mumble.
Behind the barren bushes
dangles the delicate honey comb,
where Miss Queen Bee
is a buzzing - buzzing - buzzing,
within her busy home.
Author notes
B is for Bumblebee!
A contest entry
- Pick-A-Letter by Kelli Marie.
1800 points, ended May 8, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ooh I love the Background it really ties in the figurative essence of this poem. "Bright little Bumble,
on the brink of a crumble." -even bright bumblebees can fall sometimes. great write!
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Oh, this is cool. I like the letter you chose and how you used it. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing in the contest.
Kelli -
aww lovely use of the letter B...full of imagery...best to you in the contest
~blessings always~ Trisha
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