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Cassiopeia the Beautiful



Hang your head downward
humility you learn
at the Milky Way’s edge
a crowning constellation
banished to the sky
birthing Adromedia
loved by Cepheus



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TWENTY FOUR WORDS

The prompt will be:
Gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    May 7, 2008

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    I am an astronomy freak. So this really twinkles in my mind. Loved the different consteellations and how you fit them into this. Very nice. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm


  • BluRosePoet8488
    May 5, 2008

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    Tang,
    Beautifully written. Beautifully written. What can I say? Your words inspire for one to take a long look at the moonlit stars. Well done. Keep the ink flowing and good luck! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~