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Saucy Girl



in her succulence
swollen juicy red imparts
the strawberry posed





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And who among us can resist seductress strawberry.

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  • DogFish silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    how could I not admire her
    the plump seductrice she was!


  • imkleyurflesh
    May 5, 2008
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    Beat the birds to it and everything


    Here is my two line return Tanka:


    I rose to the occasion
    bent forth and gently plucked her