in her succulence
swollen juicy red imparts
the strawberry posed
Author notes
And who among us can resist seductress strawberry.
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Comments
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how could I not admire her
the plump seductrice she was!
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Beat the birds to it and everything
Here is my two line return Tanka:
I rose to the occasion
bent forth and gently plucked her


