Lost in time
fading into the background
abandoned to the weeds
slowly sinking
away
away
going nowhere
out dated
unloved
forgotten and alone
perhaps the end is only the begining
the begining
of something new and exciting
something different.
but beautiful.
Author notes
practice I suppose not great but who knows
Please tell me what you think
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Love the end.
almost had me worried! Beautiful, short and simple. The optimistic way is the only way through hard times. And never look down. You're too good to miss out.
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One day you will find out if the end is a new beginning or just an end. In the meantime, I hope to see much more of your work. Your words were nice, but I liked the philosophy behind them better. Hang in there kar...
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Hmmmmmmm, this could be said of many people out there as well, not just an old bike in the leaves. Nicely done...Scott
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