Down the rabbithole she flies
growing big and small... soaring high
she meets a caterpillar
who looks at her in awe...
and then the story takes a twist
Alice cries out, and grabs a knife
finding the rabbit.. and then a homicide
the mad hatter cries "What an Unbirthday indeed!"
she throws the teacups to the ground
and her eyes gleam with an evil glow
She stands up and the Queen screeches
"Off with her head!!!!"
and so this tale ends... with the Queen's funeral.
A contest entry
- Dark Side Of Alice...Image Inspired xQUICKIEx!!!!!!! by voodoo ink.
700 points, ended May 6, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Honest opinions folks!!! (critical reviews encouraged!!!!!!!)
Comments
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LOL...I tell you what this is one I like best. Captures her story in darkness. I wish you luck!
~Kystal Angel
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YES....all Hell breaks loose, with this weary, drug-induced Alice...madness and mayhem runs a muck....very well written, poet...
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