The beat hummed
a near soundless rhythm
as motion held silent sway.
Blurred wings
flew
in full flight.
Into my dreams
she came
a streaking blue light
seeking....
two fantasies filled
with a single sight
the father of all
ancients
the eldest blue
dragon
this forgotten fairy flew
to once again
renew
the friendship
that only
fearless would ever do
into his hand
she sighed,
nestled,
and fell asleep
to dream
of love
with her beloved
fairy prince
in the stars of the constellation, Drago
A contest entry
- 85 WORD PICTURE PROMPT 11 - SIXTEEN ENTRIES by ShelleyA.
600 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Criticize freely, I need input to improve
Comments
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A good write and interpretation of the picture prompt. Good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Good descriptives. Good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Thank you for your writing.
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Beautiful ...
Beauty filled with ancient fantasy, dreams. and forever love ...
How we are inspired by harmony, not so?
Good luck with this contest.
Blessed be.
Myra
Thank you so much for reading my work. I truly appreciate it.
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