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Mixed Emotions

I know I once loved you.
When did I quit? I cannot say.
But I no longer like you
In that boy-girl way.

You still think we’re perfect.
That we were meant to be.
But I am not so sure
That you are meant for me.

I want to still be friends,
I’d like to be pals.
But everyone thinks
that you are my gal.

It’s fun to be with you,
I like to hang out.
But I don’t want to kiss you.
And I hate that puppy-dog pout.

So until you act like a pal,
And quit wanting more,
Then we can’t be friends,
We can’t talk anymore.

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Written December 18th, 2003

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  • pita-bread
    December 22, 2003
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    Hello, How is it going, I am glad you decided to enter my contest I liked you poem I wish you all the luck on winning as I am sure it will be a hard choice to make on my behalf. I just thought I might let you know that I am not judging my contest until the 29th of December 2003. I hope that you tell your friends on All poetry so that can enter and have a chance to win and people can read there lovely poems as well that are related to the topic. Okay well I better go lots of things to do now bye.

    From Peita.

    Check out my other poems if you haven’t already cheers.
    I liked reading this it is interesting good work.