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Inauspicious

Sultry maiden
tainted by malevolence
and unperceivable trickery
stands radiating death's harbored secrets

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13 WORDS

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  • Intricate Wordsmith
    May 28, 2008
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    Good luck in my contest.


  • SuicidalLover
    May 6, 2008

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    Oh...I like your choice of words. More to a meaning. I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 5, 2008

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    Such clever writing and depiction of the image and prompt in these 13 words...thank you for this entry in the contest, poet...

  • lizziepie
    May 5, 2008

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    cool i liek how you set it up and added lots of imaginative words so that the reader can go almost anywhere with this poem.... good write keep up the good work!