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Down the Rabbit Hole

Cheshire skulls
paved the well.
Smiles broken
by Alice's spell.
Down to the depths
of hell they plunged,
this is what they
called wonderland fun.
Late arrivals are
always accepted,
most are to be expected.
Pure ecstasy was the torturing game,
Alice loves when they scream her name.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    May 5, 2008

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    The flow was perfect in this write and thank you for re-writing this and making it fit the request in the contest...you did a really great job, poet...