My hidden truth is to much to bare,
Do you really think this was my destiny?
I walk alone in these bright spot lit shadows
As the gazes keep pouring in.
Would you mind if I left again
But not only in spirit this time?
Attempts are like walking into a nightmare,
But I don’t want to wake up anymore.
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie.(dark)Dark Society.. by Angelflower.
450 points, ended May 6, 2008, 12 entries
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450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
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Comments
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what a beautifully painful write..
You did a wonderful job in expressing your emotions,
this was very intense and heartfelt.. well done.
Best of luck..
Angel
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Ah...I take it you tried to commit suicide and failed. Now you're getting prosicuted by the ppl you see on a daily basis. A great write. Thanks for entering.
~Kystal Angel
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good poem i like it good job
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