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Coming back for more



(chorus)
Why do I have to stay, your gonna break my heart anyway.
Why do you get to go, you promised you’d stay for the show.
Messed up lies, and cursed up words,
only to say, you love me afterwards.
I had enough, no I cant stay.
So I’m gonna leave you today.
(End Chorus)

Cry all you want, I don’t care,
I don’t love you anymore.
Don’t come back, don’t you dare,
I’ll push you back, without a care.

Don’t you call anymore,
your voice causes fire in my soul.

I love you, yes it’s true,
but now, my heart,
wants to get rid of you.

(repeat chorus)
If only I could trust you again,
maybe we could still be friends,
but you threw that cahnce away,
when you begged for me to stay.

You act like you did nothing wrong,
but then why am I singing this song.
Please no apologies from you,
cause I’m never gonna forgive you.

You say you will never hurt me again,
but I’m not falling for you again.

You hurt me times before,
but I kept coming back for more.
Don’t expect to see me again,
cause I’m over you my friend.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 10

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    Sometimes people aren't always what they claim to be, sometimes people just tell you what they think you want to hear.


  • spideracer gold member
    January 31

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    You don't say what genre this poem is apart from what it obviously is, for sure it's a love song and one well written too. Great flow and great lyrics, a poem that I'd like to hear sung. Take care and good luck in the contest.


  • reckless abandon
    January 30
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    I really like this, it flows really well, like a song should


  • paperbackwriter
    January 30
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    author notes

    option 1


  • DawnKestrel
    May 29, 2008

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    Wow!
    Good luck in my contest!


  • B.m.w
    May 20, 2008
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    This is very very good. I can't say I really relate to it but i understand the point you're trying to send which is very deep and beautiful. Ps. I applaud you without the smileys ^^"""


  • Bohemianwriter
    May 6, 2008

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    omg this was amaziing, and i cold reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeallu relateeee awesome dude, omgg is there anyway of telling us how the tune goes??, cause i really really wanna know it sounds like a kick ass song..

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