Let's take a journey to far away...
Go somewhere and live life our own way.
We can do things together, like search and explore
and if you'd be willing, we can even do more.
I see you as an adventurer, so daring and carefree
I smile as I tell you this because it sounds just like me!
I don't mind if you feel you want to be held real close
Taking you in my arms will please me the most...
I have imagined this so many times but was afraid to speak
the thought of being alone together, left me sort of weak
My hand in your hand as we slowly take a walk
I’m so excited to be with you, I can hardly talk
I long to feel your arms around me, holding me real tight
cuddling up close together for the entire night
Into the early morning hours we're spent from our passion
I turn to your side and instinctively I know without asking
Our time together here is running short, so you need not say when
As I pull you into me, a spark starts the fire and ignites our bodies again
We came to this place together to be alone, just you and me
to experience a love... so tender, and so free...
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It was a pleasure writing this with you.
Please tell me what you think
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You created a beautiful world here. I'm always thinking of fantasy utopias, too, far away from all the demands of the real world. I suppose everyone does, but I wouldn't want to be there alone. Without the kind of love and passion you described in this poem, life is empty no matter how beautiful the setting.
Thanks for the escape.
Mark
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oh my...such a sweet and lovely poem...the flow is beautiful and the blending of two beautiful souls really does shine in this one...loved it completely! blessings always~ Trisha
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Thanks!
whenever you come it must b e major! l.o.l. I TRULY APPRECIATE YOUR SUPPORT!
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL AND TENDER WRITE!!!!
Such are the dreams of many of us who do not share with that special someone who we want so to find!
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I can feel the warmness around the every word...a song of the love and the beauty of the soul is mixed in the lines...just wonderful ..well done....
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This is insanely brilliant! I think everyone already knows but I don't like love poems too much .. so I kind of hesitated when I clicked. But I'm taken aback and I stay in awe. Well done!
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I thank you
and we're very appreciative of the wonderful comment! we're Glad you took the time to read and then enjoy having read our piece.
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Beautiful
This piece gave me chills! It is so much what I am going through in my life. It has great movement and rhyme
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This is quite lovely! I had no idea it was a collaboration! Very well penned thoughts of love and adoration. Romantic and very sweet in its composure; nicely done!!!
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AHHHH how sweetly your words flow together between the both of you, a dream that many have hoping and desiring to be fulfilled. very nicely done my friend. thank you for sharing this.
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a journey only two can take, completeness in each others arms, a time a freedom to enjoy each others oneness...just beautiful! you two have penned a true master piece thank you kindly for sharing with me
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I am loving this. It made me feel alive and good. Makes me wish for every good thing life has to offer and the most important thing here is love.
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Thank you so much!
We are pleased you enjoyed this piece! trhank you so much for the comments! p.s. I LOVE THAT BLACK SWAN AVATAR! funny enough I actually drew a black swan in ms-paint and use it as my wallpaper on my pc! -
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Indeed I loved the piece. You two make a wonderful team! Now as to the swan, I love the idea of it, it is so elusive and mysterious. Once upon a time it was considered to be an impossibility. It embodies me. I so love shocking people and proving them wrong.
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How wonderfully beautiful this is!!
The love and passion just shine forth so wonderfully; so magically
I wish you both well
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You always imbue them with so much passion and warmth. So romantic, and so sensual. Well done.
Garrison
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This is beautiful and as is in all your love poems the image of passion is clear and vivid. You both did a wonderful job as I can't see who wrote which part, it is all so smooth.
Love,
Amera♥
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Mesmerizing
Beautiful rhyme in couplets, and you tell a tale od passion with pure class. This a romance of fire, a heated passion you have created and I adore this write....excellent!....novy
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very good
great rhythm and content this flows so well and is a very enjoyable read
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Oooo! WOW! This is really, really well written, my friend. I like this one. It ignites one's imagination with a furious flame. Keep the ink flowing and thanks for sharing this. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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