Bless my eyes with shades of serenity
blossoming beauty in blues
floating in feathered wave
beneath an enchanting sea of Coral
where hues are Heaven sent
in visions of violet, swirling
secrets spun into gold
as marmalade dreams melt into memories
carried within precious pearls
until love blooms-
then strung upon heartstrings
fluttering
as aquatic apparition
to this dance of destiny.
♥♥
Author notes
Stage 1 Destination - Australia:
Choose something about Australia
that interests or enchants you -
Great Barrier Reef....Stretching for over 2000 miles, one of the World's natural wonders. A mesmerizing mix of palm fringed islands, coral cays and tropical reef, with water a dazzling blue inhabited by the richest marine life. In fact over 400 species of coral, 1500 species of fish life.
http://www.aussiegoodies.com/images/goodies/Great%20Barrier%20Reef.jpg
A contest entry
- Tour De Monde - Stage 1 by Errant Panther.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Congratulations on your award and making it to the next round
joy to have you still with us.
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz -
I loved the flow of this piece and the imagery that made you feel you were drifting through the water, but I do wish it had been longer.
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Ahh a delight to see vision through your words,
a soft wonderful read and a great entry into this round.
Blessings,
Frozentearz -
This is a wonderful poem I really love the imagery and the watery feel of the poem - enchanting! Good luck in the contest (although with this entry I don't think you need any luck
) - this is simply beautiful.
Keep writing
Polly
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your imagery is fantastic..and the Great Barrier Reef is so enchanting..what a marvelous destination and a vivid description..thanx so much for sharing..blesssings..namaste..
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lovely soft wording make this piece as enchanting as diving on the reef itself and viewing the wonders it conceals.
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Beauty becomes your words.
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Nice One
Not a half bad littlwe write about going down under to Australia. well worded and quite nice flow make this an attractive unique poem. any ways well penned & great beauty really grace this entery into the contest to stand out. any ways keep up the good work & good luck 
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OH my! A very enchanting piece my dear friend.. your imagery is just outstanding.. bringing serenity to the soul... WOW!! So very beautiful!!
I wish you all the best in the contest
Jazzy
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Beautifully Inscribed Sis!
Another piece that shares the wonders of your works.
Thanks for sharing sis, and I wish ya all the best.
Much love and light, your brother, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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