Wearing the moonlight
softly
upon your silence ~
the cloudless sky
holds me deeper into you
with the twinkling of Heaven
reminding us ~
to breathe...
Author notes
The prompt :
Gazing the stars 'neath a moonlit sky
A contest entry
- Cherished Quickie - PIF by StormGoddess.
425 points, ended May 7, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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OMG, utterly beautiful. This is soft, tender and breathtaking. (Hmmm, I think I just repeated half your poem lol) Excellent. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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I'm breathing - this is lovely!
Always stiff competition from your pen dear lady!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang
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hey can you check out hands of fate
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hey love your poem it's been a long time since we've talked cheek out some of my newer poems they are much different now i hope you like them also some good news i've written over 200 n poems now but not all of them are on AP
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i love it
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