waterfalls in the african rainforest

misty water
splashes upon my face
exotic animals surround this colorful place

and the nosies they make

so peaceful

it makes me think

this african rainforest is beatiful

but the thing that sets it off

is the waterfall

just by the nosie it makes

sends me into a place that i can only imagin

Author notes

happy birthday to you!!!!!!!

i know you said you like waterfalls and africa so i desided to put that into this poem since its your b-day!!!i hope you like it though!!!!!!!!

P.S.i made it just for you,manda!!!

A contest entry

MY BIRTHDAY WAS ON MAY 4th!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by Sahlili20. 450 points, ended May 23, 2008, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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By me, right now

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Sahlili20
May 6, 2008

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Oh, I love it! You did a great job! I love how you made a fresh write! Kudos! Thank you for entering my contest!