There was this hip elephant,
a hoochie mama she was .
She could play a mean keyboard,
and in the pool make quite a fuss.
She would swing her hips and bounce about as she jumped,
while playing the keyboard with her trunk.
She had a watcher about and she dove right in,
only this made the water in the pool mighty thin.
Oh she had long eyelashes and wore this tutu you see,
for she was a hoochie mama out catching some breeze.
She played a tune and next to her friend she did the slide like the best,
It was kinda like Michale Jackson when he was under arrest.
The whole block would rock,
when this hoochie mama played.
For the squirrels and the birds all joined in that day.
She would suck up some water,
and shower the crowd.
Then bat those long eyelashes as if saying how about now.
And everyone began to sing and sounded like light my fire,
that's when that hoochie mama asked her new friend she admired ,
couldya .wouldya ,love me for you are definetly hired .
Oh don't think critters don't have fun on their own,
for I saw just yesterday a pair of love birds in a sing along.
Once the crickets joined in the love song took flight,
and even the fireflies came to give this party some light.
Then as the moon rose high and the hoochie mama settled down,
Love shadows like cung-foo fighters danced upon the ground.
Us humans have nothing on the animals you see,
for they don't have a hoochie mama who likes loving like me .
Author notes
elephants pool , keyboard
I hope you enjoy my little love story
A contest entry
- The Challenge of Love by Kiryuuofloveandhate.
600 points, ended June 5, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love this, very funny very visual very sweet only I believe it's tutu not too too..great poem
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awesome imagery, it brought a smile to my face. you posses quite the imagination to produce a write like this, i completeyly enjoyed this.
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This is cute and made me smile. I could visualize the whole scene. You have a fantastic imagination with these things!
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cute!!
I love the rhyme. The meter gets away from you every now and then, but on the whole, a very enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest!
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haha good one... great and funny write.... thnks for sharing this with me and good luck in your contsesst.... have a great day
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This is an interesting write. It certainly took me to a whole new world. It was very cute and I enjoyed reading it. Nicely done.
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Humorous and great fun to read. I love it when people don't take things so seriously (something which I have never been good at) Extremely clever and well done.
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patty its brill..good luck in the contest..
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This was cool.
This was cool and sort of something new for you. I like it when a poet tries new things and lets their muse work for them. So you take note that this was an interesting and entertaining piece to read. -
OH MAN THAT FUNNY
that's awesome you did it perfectly i love it so much
good luck
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Ohhhhhhhh, what a fun read! Sounds like this Hoochie Mama is gonna have some fun for sure!! I love this!!!
Best of luck in this contest!!
and love
Nyetta
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