It reflects upon you
To only see yourself
And to reflect on you
Makes thee so blind
And as much as you like
That mirror will not stay
It will be gone forever
Now that this day came
Now inside that reflection
Stands a dark man
He holds up his gun
And makes a small smirk
Hold the revolver tight, aim at the innocent.
Shatter their mirror and show them reality.
A contest entry
- Blame it on society. by abyssal.
475 points, ended May 10, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Can I get an honest Critique? xD
Comments
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I like the concept.
Thanks for the entry.
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I like the concept.
Thanks for the entry. -
Like I said before, love.
You have talent, and this is really good.
Good luck on the contest!
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wow another good one... cant wait to read the rest
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