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Lost Words

How can I say
What breaks my heart
Here I lay
With a lose of words

I want to tell
What I can’t even say
Our love, it has fallen
Our peace, it is gone

I can’t do this anymore
I can’t lie anymore
I can’t hide anymore
No more lost words

I’m sorry I must say this
But like a flame in a blizzard, we’re done

Can I get an honest Critique? xD

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