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ONE Plus one Equals None

ONE plus one equals none
It makes no sense, and yet it does
This isn’t a game for fun
As ONE and one thought

ONE always comes home from work
He is angry and his wife is loud
So ONE grabs a fork
With one swift movement, the fork shatters ones skull

ONE then goes on to have fun
But one continues to haunt him
Now ONE grabs the gun
And with one pull, his mind is shattered

As you can all see, it will always be none
Can a message be any clearer?

Can I get an honest Critique? xD

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  • Shadow Darkstar silver member
    May 7

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    Uhm. Maybe you could explain this a bit more. It's a bit scattered and there's no real story behind it, or at least so I could read. Just a suggestion.