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Shattered

Missing image

Lack me of sense and paranormal resources

You know I'm never going to be as pretty as you want me to.

I can't please you on things I can't fix....

I can't make you remain with me, if you look only for the outside...

 

 

I am obsolete of feeling, for only angst and pain aches in me...

I hate to look at that monster every morning;

I hate the resemblence of who I am to be.

 

And I am shattered. Life consumes me more than it ever did.

Beauty is all I care. Beauty is all I need to conquer your weak heart.

Envy is my weakness. I dare envy you, for loving what less matters,

And for not wanting what hurts more...

 

{♥Love♥}

Author notes

"I want to be beautiful in any way.... I'm not good enough anyways..."-XXVampireeyesXX

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    June 10, 2008

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    so powerful and sad the background and poem fits well together as does the picture and quote within your authors notes. you have written how so many of us feel and vision ourself as it is a constant battle and conflict within our minds. well done with this


  • XXxXBassMeisterxXxX
    May 29, 2008

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    Amazing. The background and everything just went so perfectly. I absolutely loved it. Just beautiful and amazing in every way. Great job.


  • Lord Merlynn
    May 8, 2008

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    very nicely written and worded. I like this one a lot. The background is nice, and fits the poem well. Great job here.


  • Lonely Christina
    May 8, 2008

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    oh my! love the background and love the powerful words here hunni! everyone can realte to this cuz everyone deep down inside truely wants beauty (i kno i do) good job and good luck in the contst
    christina


  • JustFallingApart
    May 7, 2008

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    hey hey hey what is pretty but an opinon of appearence, what is beauty but within, what is love but a longing for ones beauty while fake love is in need of pretty. Nice write and your backround is wicked awsome, best of luck in the contest

  • JustFallingApart
    May 7, 2008
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    hey hey hey what is pretty but an opinon of appearence, what is beauty but within, what is love but a longing for ones beauty while fake love is in need of pretty. Nice write and your backround is wicked awsome, best of luck in the contest


  • SilverMoonFeathers
    May 6, 2008

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    Wow great job you've done here. This is exactly how i feel about myself a lot and it hurts a lot ..not exactly a great feeling, eh?.....i hate feeling like it but thats how the atmosphere around me feels like at al times and i can't help but get caught in it....this poem is very tearfully beautiful and broken..if you get what i mean...you did an excellent Job.

    just asking: Do you want to be my AP Sister? i'd love for you to



    ~--->{Silky}


  • Justmenow
    May 6, 2008

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    what a touching wonderful poem, its so good, well done, everyone is beautiful in dsme way and the people that look beautiful are normally the people that are worst of in life im sure u r iincredibly beaqutiful

    well done


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 5, 2008

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    thats how i feel about me... hon your beautiful... inside and out... i love you sis.... sending a million hugs to you... the poem is awesome.... wonderful job on this..... thnk you for sharing with me.... hugs


  • sapphireangelwings
    May 5, 2008

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    I sense a very deep pain with in this...beauty, true beauty comes from with in. Oddly, this is something that has come up in my own life. I think society has a whole paints a false picture of what beauty truly is. Even pain can be beautiful if perceived in the right context. I think you painted a very creative piece that stirs the pot of emotions we all have and don't always wish to admit. I wish the world to see your true beauty.......for it is there with in the lines.

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