Light swirls of mist,
gather among the darkening azure sky.
Silver stars bewitching above,
casting a thin veil of light,
upon the land.
Twilight washes over,
as the sun sets with fiery passion.
Faint golden rays cast a breathtaking silhouette
upon the turquoise Heavens.
Nightfall soon approaches,
echoes of the wind haunt an ethereal world
created by the dim shadows
of the night...
Author notes
For contest "AP Family": Hey! My username is faithful-star and I would like to be your AP sis.
A contest entry
- For those with no trophies... by islekine.
600 points, ended May 11, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP Family by Theory Of The Lost.
450 points, ended August 16, 2008, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful, WOW like your comments say you just painted a BEAUTIFUL picture with your words very well done, very descriptive well worded just the right length. really liked this very well done!! Congrats .. I'd love to have you as a sister, i read some other pieces of you work you are a great writer good luck in the contest!!
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Hehe, thanks! And also, thanks for the HM in your contest!
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aww this is a beautiful piece of poetry honey,
i love the way its wrote and your wording,
congrats on the shiney there all my love,
love you honey,
kitty xxx -
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Aww, thanks...that means alot to me!
Remember that I love you too!
<3
~Faithful-Star
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wow the words in this poem really paint an amazing image in your mind!! Good job little sis!!! I love it!
Thank you for entering
Loves your big sis
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Hey Shirls! Its me again... This is another one of the totally AMAZING and GOOD poems EVER!!! I like your diction( lol ) I love how you described every single detail and line. My favourite stanza is the first one. I love how you used such powerful words.
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superb!
i really liked this! A lot! I can picture this sunset clearly in my mind!
my fave line is "Faint golden ray cast a breathtaking silhouette upon the turquoise Heavens." Well done, well done!
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Aloha!
Thanks for entering...very well penned. Nice imagery.
Write on!
*PEACE*
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