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blue heart pink soul

You are the shy kind,
Dressed in black with a heart of blue.
I'm just a plain girl
With a heart to big for a pink soul.
I watch you from my world,
I'm caged in my own mind
and you are stuck in yours.
I cant help but wonder what do you see?
With ever glance you give me
I start to know ee will never be.
Our worlds and our hearts would burn,
So bright the whole world would see
and turn away in fear and shame.
It's too bad because maybe,
you could have set me free
from my world in a jar.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi SamSam594,
    I like your poem alot short and to the point. I think the ee might be we though a little typo. Glad to see you entering contests. Good luck in it. If you have any questions about the site feel free to im me. Hope you enjoy your stay here.
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