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The days I spend with you



As the first light of day picks its way through the haze
the clouds in their innocence are soft and the air cool and quiet.
Just the sound of your breathing can be heard as you sleep.
Again my eyes trace the outline of your body under the covers
as I recall the events of the most passionate of nights.
looking down at you I smile at the new found glow on your face.
Stirring as I gently brush my lips against your lips,
you reach out to me, wrapping your arms  around my body.
From this moment on my love I know
that I want to hold the days forever in my arms
especially the ones I spend with you.


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I want to hold the days in my arms forever especially the days I spent with you.....Unknown. 'quote from the contest'

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    This is just a voice of your heart..honest and true as well..my thanks for such a wonderful piece my friend..well done...

  • manofmystery
    May 6, 2008
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    beautiful xxx


  • Jonathan Wikkins silver member
    May 6, 2008

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    great piece, full of love and caring, and desire too!

    i love this one, it's a winner in my book!

    good luck in the contest!

    mike, aka jonathan wikkins