S Sweet fragrant breezes cool
A Around you gardens are vibrant
N Night beach walks with your Lover
D Delicious picnics on the beach
C Cotton candy clouds pattern the azure sky
A Adults kick off their shoes and relax
S Surf leaves shells and sand dollar treasures
T Time spent with family and friends – Priceless
L Lovely memories for the future
E Eternal ebb and flow of our Lives
S Summer dreams
A contest entry
- ~ Summer Dreams ~ (Acrostic) by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended May 22, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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ooh you have painted a delight through the imagery
within this acrostic, May it always be an eernal ebb and flow within our lives.
Blessings,
Frozentearz -
i really like the word choice you have used in this wonderful acrostic i like the feelings that this tells about it seems slightly broken and maybe you could eliminate the double letters so that it flows better, i used to do that with my acrostics and i was suggested to take them out, it does make them flow better, but i love the thoughts behind this poem, good luck in the contest, -Amy
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Total relaxation this acrostic spells! Time spent with family and friends indeed priceless! Thanks for entering this wonderful acrostic and best wishes,
Frogz~ -
Beautifully written. Summer has all the elements I dearly love, and you mentioned them all. "Cotton candy clouds pattern azure sky" This made me think of the sky just before sunset, as cotton candy is pink. You need to move the line with the "E" to line up with the rest! THank you for making me smile today , as my best friend just died.
Love, Shana XOXO
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Wow lady i love the feel of tis poem. This speaks joy from beginning to end....joe
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