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Get away

All I want to do is get away
If only for one drama free day
Can anyone hear what I am trying to convay?

Get away to the iniocence I lost long ago
Get away to the freedom I long for.

All I want is to get way
So don't feel bad when
I don't react to my own name

Author notes

I'm the type of girl...that turns up the music way loud, just to tune out reality (I'm not a suck up!)

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  • ChrissyJean
    May 6, 2008
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    This is an amazing poem...but you didn't incorporate the quote very well.


    • InMyOwnGlassBox
      May 6, 2008
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      yeah, I didn't incorperate it very well at all. I wrote what the quote reminded me of. well thanks for the idea for my poem.