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Angel Angel

Angel Angel
Falling from the stars,

Please land here
And heal my scars,

Mend my pain
With nothing more than a beat of your wings,

That glow with the brilliant light
Every morning sun brings,

Angel Angel
Return to the skies,

And let me attempt capture your essence
With my mortal eyes

Author notes

I was just thinking about all of the hardships we suffer, and thought about how great it would be if we had our own angel watching us and helping us through those hardhips.

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  • Immer Leben
    November 10, 2008
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    This is beautiful, hunny.
    Really.
    Kind of sad, but also very sweet.
    I love the last two stanzas:
    "Angel Angel
    Return to the skies,

    And let me attempt capture your essence
    With my mortal eyes"

    And I also love the line, "Falling from the stars."
    Beautiful.
    Amazing write. ^.^




    ~S~


  • Kwalk
    May 5, 2008

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    Very Good

    I like it. it is very ture. we do go through hardships. a lot. we should know. XD =D


    • Demoni
      May 5, 2008
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      Thank you for the comment, K-chan, but we really should feel lucky. There are people who suffer much more than we do.