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The End

The End

In the end of it all
The world, our lives
My final words
Would be the same

I love you forever
For always and eternity
No matter when
The end of it comes

I promise my love
I’ll always be there
Even in death
No matter if hell or heaven

I’ll remain at your side
Until the very end
Should god take my life?
Before your time is done

I promise to wait
At that golden gate
So the angels will know
That you were my love

May god rest in silence?
Until the time
When I see your face
Approach that golden gate

I will remain there
Until that day
When god decides
It’s finally the end.

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  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    Hello ddrbaby1221 ,
    What a sweet message to the person you love!
    Such an amazing promise you've shaped into a beautiful poem!

    I love reading about love especially good poems like this! Your poem made me smile!

    I think your title was wisely chosen as well!
    it fits in perfectly with the poem!

    good job!

    Lio
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  • Love this poem court!!!
    Very well done
    Yeayeaaa