His Muse
#What is their rhyme or reason
they take they forsake their mistake.
Their are those of us
some treat as deposable
seeming to never be of use .
You know those time s
where there’s a dollar to be had
or someone gets a free ego trip at your expense.
Are you that selfish bitch?
Remember the dude that feel in love,
held out his heart
only to have it caressed
patted on the head .
You told how much he meant to you
only to find you ran out .
Are you that bitch!
Or are you a father?
you know the one that used your son.
I know you remember
the time you and he made a deal
fifty, fifty remember.
He owned that which was agreed upon,
remember you fucked him
didn't even kiss him.
Oh I know your his mother ,
and a great mom you were.
He was seen as handicapped,
there were those
whom she saw without worry.
He she saw with tainted eyes.
bullshit bitch !!!
Yes you did
You know I speak the truth,
I saw him hide his life away
You weren't glad, nor happy of this.
as long as he was out of sight.
No your the one that smiled at him
with a twinkle in your eye.
You called him stinky
remember he tripped
you started laughing.
and called him knock knee.
Or were you the one
playing dodge ball
aiming at no other them him.
Oh your that fucking teacher
who sat him in the hall
in his first grade year.
For shitting himself
telling his classmates
to make fun of him.
He would get angry
felt and still feels alone .
I seen this man do things
healthy strong man cant do.
I read things he wrote
that brought tears.
Please tell me what you think
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Oh very deep muse indeed
I have seen this in my liftime and its sick when young people are used as another muse and they take away the self asteem of another .Teachers often dont do their jobs and often go along with students which shuld be a crime indeed .But for the child he feels he is alone and stays alone far too long.
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How awful
definetly some raw emotions shared here.
I saw a reply to someone below, you saying it's true etc etc....Just made it even more of a deep and meaningful right..just made the emotion come through even stronger..
A brilliant write, thank you sharing it Joe
Cindy
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Hi Cindy thank you for reading, and yes its all true, and these are list a few......joe
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OMGGGGGG
Wow this is amazing.So much raw emotion its so good one of the best poems iv read in a long time. wow is all i can say.
You know those time s
where there’s a dollar to be had
or someone gets a free ego trip at your expense.
Are you that selfish bitch?
These are the best lines ever wow keep up the good work
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this is full of raw emotions, is very moving, and very honest. i like it but... it could use improvement. the wording is a bit odd, but all in all it's a piece i enjoy. nice job! keep it up.
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Paladin: this is such a heart-rending write. The cruelty is so vivid and uncalled or. I know such people exist; but, it is so beyond what should have to be tolerated.
Lady D
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Hi My Fav Lady I know thia dude well and everyting written is true......joe
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VERY GOOD
HOW TRUE TO LIFE THIS IS SOME PEOPLE DO ALL THE USING AND SOME DO ALL THE GIVING JUST TO BE STEPPE ON BUT FOR WHAT WE NEVER KNOW LIFE IS LIFE AND PEOPLE ARE JUST CRUEL
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