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You already know that

I won't say that I love you
I'm not starting to cry
I'm not missing your boldness
neither I will describe
the way you look at my eyes when you kiss me

You already know that

I won't say you're my sun or my sky,
You're the poison on my lips
you're the cloud passing by
you're what I need to breathe
You're a shadow,a lie


But you already know that

Should I ask if you love me?
Should I stare,waiting for your hand to take mine?
Should I tremble from the touch of your fingers
Should I die if you go away?
Because I would

And you already know that

You know that I love you
like I loved the sun
Like I reach for the stars,
for my dreams of lullaby
I really do

You already know that

So stay with me till the end of time
Eternal darkness around us
satin hell of sweet crimes
But after there is fault,there is fear,there is pride
I can't handle it...

And you already know that

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  • Margaret Denham gold member
    August 23, 2008

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    So many thoughts and emotions tumbled through your words but always with the underlying feeling of love.

    Thank you foe your entry and best wishes in the judging.

    Margaret


  • earthstar
    June 2, 2008

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    Thats how I feel at times some many feeling going around my heart. Some times the grief is so bad I can not handle it. Thank you for sharing this write with me in my hour of grief.


  • StarEyes
    May 26, 2008

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    Thanks for this entry into this contest! What a beautiful read this is!!

    Best of luck to you in this contest!


  • storiesuntold gold member
    May 26, 2008

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    excellent

    You have written every woman whispers on days of loniness and despair and in the whispers so shall we feel the hope to see love turned back around. Often through fear and pride so many shall never know what could have been and yet some stayed and saw it wasnt the love they so dreamed it would be .


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 5, 2008

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    BREATH TAKING

    I found myself hanging upon your every word...the emotions are so real and strong...And you already know that...sighs...wow! thank you so much for sharing with me and for entering

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