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Begging My Lover

Two thirty in the morning
Book of comfort made me cry
I was up late cleaning
Just needed to try
To answer the voices repeating
Each time you asked me why
I'm sorry for not explaining
So please just let me try?

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  • Arizona Sunset
    May 6, 2008

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    I too like to read books of comfort, but they don't always seem to work for me...loved your imagery in this poem. blessings always~ Trisha


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 5, 2008

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    Good flow on this piece. You imagery is strong too. I like the way that this rhymes. Well done.

    Wayne Leon